SETTING
The story took place in Oriental plaza in Johannesburg. During day time.
MAIN CHARACTER
Mrs Nebo
she was of medium of height
the wife of an important official of the African front
she lived in the white suburb of houghton
she was rich
PLOT
Mrs Nebo went to the oriental plaza for shopping with her friend Margret. While walking from shop to shop Mrs Nebo saw a beautiful indian dress and decided to buy it . Mrs Nebo was a rich woman. She was a wife of an official Clive Nebohe.She decided to buy a silk scarf inorder to match it with a dress. In the shop where she bought the dress there was no a scarf wich she wanted , so she went to another shop where she found the scarf she was looking for. After asking about its price she realised that she did not have enough cash so she offered the shopkeeper a cheque, Mr Sakur (shopkeeper ). Which he refused (cheque) because he don't accept cheques in his shop. Mrs Nebo felt humiliated and started arguing with the shopkeeper, when other shopkeepers heard about the arguments they came to see what was happening. They were tying to convince Mr Sakur to give the scarf to Mrs Nebo but he decided to stick to his rules rather than accepting the cheque. One of the shopkeepers Mr Sader decided to give Mr sakur cash for a scurf so that Mrs could go with the scurf and stopped the arguments.
Mrs Nebo went to the oriental plaza for shopping with her friend Margret. While walking from shop to shop Mrs Nebo saw a beautiful indian dress and decided to buy it . Mrs Nebo was a rich woman. She was a wife of an official Clive Nebohe.She decided to buy a silk scarf inorder to match it with a dress. In the shop where she bought the dress there was no a scarf wich she wanted , so she went to another shop where she found the scarf she was looking for. After asking about its price she realised that she did not have enough cash so she offered the shopkeeper a cheque, Mr Sakur (shopkeeper ). Which he refused (cheque) because he don't accept cheques in his shop. Mrs Nebo felt humiliated and started arguing with the shopkeeper, when other shopkeepers heard about the arguments they came to see what was happening. They were tying to convince Mr Sakur to give the scarf to Mrs Nebo but he decided to stick to his rules rather than accepting the cheque. One of the shopkeepers Mr Sader decided to give Mr sakur cash for a scurf so that Mrs could go with the scurf and stopped the arguments.
Hellow brother ,you real did well .But i will give you 6 out of ten because of some spelling mistakes and you did not use capital letters in the second paragraph.
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